Presented infront of Katherine Wilcox and Cam.
Katherine. This is what Katherine thought if my live presentation. 5 being the best.
Stage presence - 5
planning and preparation - 5
voice control - 3
interesting content and performance - 5
professionalism and valid content - 4
knowledge of product - 4
sale ability - 5
Over all Katherine thought my presentation was very good. She said i knew what i was doing and my planning was great. She said because i shown that i believed in my final product, it made her believe in it too! She said i was very confident, i had a great content of research, i was professional, confident with my product, knowledge was good but needed to know more about the content, she would buy and fund my product due to a great presentation and good use of research, i was i little fidgety and my speech was a little quiet and when i turned my head it was hard to hear me so i need to work on talking a little louder and need to make more eye contact, she thought i seemed unsure weather to talk loud or not.
Cam. This is what Cam thought of my live presentation. 5 being the best.
Stage presence - 4
planning and preparation - 5
voice control - 3
interesting content and performance - 5
professionalism and valid content - 5
knowledge of product - 4
sale ability - 4
Over all Cam thought i done well during my presentation. Because i wanted to stand up whilst i was presenting, she was very impressed as she says some people find it hard to stand and some people would rather sit. She says that i was being very professional, i had good planning evidence with a thorough production diary, i had good language and terminology was well used, she also agreed with Katherine and said i was a little quiet but not TOO quite that she couldn't hear, but i could have been a little louder at times, she says a little more thorough research could have been approached like older photographers and their styles in the 60's and 80's. Over all Cam thought i done well and was impressed with my presentation.
I think i done well during my presentation, and i am proud that i chose to stand up because that's a big thing for me as i am quite a shy person. I am not very loud and i never usually talk loud and thats why i was being a little quiet but i agree that i should work on my speech and work on being louder so that people don't struggle to hear me! I felt like i stuttered a little bit and i agree with Katherine, i did seem unsure but that was because i was nervous and i went blank for a few seconds. Over all i think i done well in my interview and i am happy with my feedback and i agree with what has been said and with a little bit of work i could definitely work on getting my voice a bit louder.
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